Funny
He is a big man who loves to tell jokes
He has blue ocean eyes and a white dot that sparkles like a firework
Smells like he ate burnt eggs which is foul and revolting
His arms go swinging round like they have no bones
His hands are nice and gentle
He carries a bag that has thousands of tricks
His voice is really high as if he used helium
I like your similes Zavier they are great
ReplyDeletei love it how his voice is very high
ReplyDeleteHi Zavier I think that this is a cool blog post and I think that you have some really cool similes like "Smells like he ate burnt eggs" next time maybe have some more adjectives for his hands
ReplyDeleteHello Zavier I really like your poem, I like the smile you wrote that "His voice is really high as he used helium".
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ReplyDeletehello Zavier i really like that the man likes to tell funny jokes and has a blue ocean eyes,great job zavier keep up the great work
ReplyDeleteHello Zavier I really love the way that you tell me what he looks like what he does and what he smells like.You should add what kind of tricks that are in his bag but you did awesome anyways.This reminds me of a time when did man on tv was going around doing crazy stuff I really like your work keep it up.
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