We had to write a recount about a coke and mentos experiment
Coke Eruption
It was a warm cloudy Monday, Toroa was walking back to class from playing ball rush, when Miss Mccormick yelled “Study and Lab come behind the staff room!” Everyone from the Study and Lab strolled over to where the teachers were. As soon as we were behind the staff room our mouths dropped. We were full of excitement because on the dark blue plastic chair was a bottle full of coke zero and in Miss Thomason’s hand was a whole packet of mint flavored mentos some people screamed because they were that excited everyone as fast as lightning sat down to see the amazing experiment that was about to happen. Miss Thomason had to tell everybody to be quiet because they were talking too much. Eventually it was silent then Miss Thomason said that most of us would have already experienced a coke and mentos experiment Miss Thomason opened the mentos packet and ate one all the kids yelled if they could have some but she said no everyone sighed. Miss Thomason asked how many mentoses we should in the coke some people yelled four and others yelled
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