Giving Feedback

This is my feedback to Kieran on his summary about The Prince And The Albatross Egg

My Summary

For Term 3 Week 2 + 3 What Do You Mean Reading Group wrote a summary about The Prince and the Albatross Egg this is my summary. 

ENJOY!!!

Funny

Funny

He is a big man who loves to tell jokes

He has blue ocean eyes and a white dot that sparkles like a firework

Smells like he ate burnt eggs which is foul and revolting

His arms go swinging round like they have no bones

His hands are nice and gentle

He carries a bag that has thousands of tricks

His voice is really high as if he used helium

Similes screencastify

This week me and Jesse had to create 3 similes and have 3 pictures 

Hope You Like It!!!

Metaphor screencastify

                                    This is a metaphor that me and Jesse made Enjoy!

Zavier and Jesse creating Similes

Your goal is to create at least 3 Similes with a picture. You can work with a buddy.

Write your Simile here:

1. Zavier is as fast as Usain Bolt.
2. Tizzy looks like an ogre.
3. Math quest 2 is extremely good like Fortnite.

Insert the meaning of your Simile and a picture.

1. It means that Zavier is the fastest kid in the world.
2. It means that Tizzy looks super ugly.
3. It means that Math quest 2 is super fun and cool just like Fortnite.

Zavier and Jesse creating metaphors